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Date d'inscription : 18/02/2020

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MessageSujet: draft thing    draft thing  EmptyLun 6 Avr - 2:48

lyren goes home from school, texting boi
shes on her phone, gets hit by a car
(definitely not isekai'd, but jokes about it)
is saved by opale, hallucinations and all
she not hurt tho, comes home
opale appears again and tries to befriend lyren
tells her who she is and that she needs lyren to “stop the end of the world before its too late” tells her that she will make her all seeing, and that she needs to save the future
lyren is like wtf are you talking about, why me, what impact will i do really
“i need you to kill someone”
lumia listening at the door, smiling
ANNOUNCEMENT OF THE MISSION
“ BLACK TEARS “

fb to lumia call, rox being like "what do you want? I sent you money already." "I just want to know how you're doing..." ".... I'm fine. is that it?" "yea..?" "then goodbye. "
drops phone and breaks the screen, lumia is pleased (mom is out the way)
lyren texting boy and telling him she just lived something very weird, she’ll have to talk about it with him tomorrow cause she doesnt know what to do
lumia comes in and tells her mom called, mocks lyren for boi and how they not together yet, lyren is like no way fuck off
(trying to be friendly like aha im sister am normal)
lumia leaves (to see dia), lyren goes to smoke one
opale tells her lumia is weird, lyren is just like" she always like that"
ffw to morning, lyren wakes up (actually no)
everything in flames and sirens outside, big booms and all, black sun, lyren panics
running around and yelling irl (nobody home)
opale takes her hands off her eyes and tells her "that's the future if you don't do anything"
everything daijobu irl, just lot fear for lyren. she wakes up lying on the ground
realizes her nails have turned black
FIRST STEP
MENACE
“ PROTECTOR “










lyren meets with boi outside, nervous about it and about telling him
she pretends everything is fine, but boi sees through it
“you never do your nails. your sister abducted you, or something happened…” “wait. this is not nail polish.”
lyren confesses what happened, breaks down, tells everything (opale is silent, doesnt manifest) boi supports her, calms her down
after a while of them talking, boi tries and approach with lyren
shes shocked and like “time to go home lmao”, leaves alone
on the way, opale appears to her and confronts lyren
“the menace is under your eyes, its so easy to prevent. she knows, they know. what do you think you’ll get from getting more people involved ?”
hints that the problem is lumia, “someone you know very well” … or not lumia ?
“all you have to do is terminate them, or its everyone else.”
lyren is mad at opale for accusing her sister to cause the end of the world, and orders her to leave her alone. opale disappears “you’ll see in time”
lyren thinks she’s going insane and violent, that its all in her head, its psychosis
goes home, lumia and dia are here
her fingers are growing black and rotten
goes to her room, texts boi “i think im going insane”
SECOND STEP
BREAKING POINT
“ BEYOND REDEMPTION “

lyren just in class (gloves), having an existential crisis about the whole situation
thinking about opale, about boi, about lumia, and what if everything is real
school hallucinations, teach is possessed and chases lyren around school
“why are your hands black,what did you do ? why are your running, are you afraid of something ? of something you did ? of something you have to do ?”
she hides and eventually runs away, loses him
on the way home, she goes another way bc shes scared of being followed
hallucinations outside on a bridge in construction, with the sea of corpses (lyren and everyone is in)
opale pops back in “ this will happen soon “
her hands are all blackened, “you still have time to stop it”
“leave me alone, i never agreed to do this”
lyren comes home crying, frantically washing her hands, lumia takes her in and tries to comfort her and calm her down
“i dont know what to do anymore, my mind is going crazy”
“idk i must have touched nasty stuff outside or something, it doesnt want to wash off”
lumia offers to chill tonight, calls in dia and boi friend over
“you’re 15 and mom’s not around, dont you think i know your... one friend’s number ?”
they spend a nice night together, nothing bad happens (bit of introduction to dia and her relationship to lumia, links to lumia and lyren, etc. refs to past things !)
its awkward between boi and lyren, and also he knows and see her hands worsening
when in bedroom together, he takes her hands (hurting) and bandages them
“you’ll be okay. everything will be okay”
THIRD STEP
STITCHING BACK UP
“ WEAKNESS LEAVING MY HEART “


“if you won’t do it, then i will.” opale loses her patience, as the blackness grows
lyren is in a dream, arguing with opale about what must be done : killing lumia
opale possesses her body (black eyes and black arms spreading page by page) and goes over to lumia’s room with a knife
as shes standing over lumia in lyren’s body, lumia wakes up, and lyren is back to herself
they freeze in silence, a shadow is behind lyren at the door (its faeris)
lyren is horrified of what she’s doing, drops the knife and runs away
dia is half woken up and asks lumia whats up, as she just stands here. “lyren is just acting weird, im gonna see if its something wrong with boi” “okay *snoozes*
lumia looks very frustrated and angry, but contained
lyren is running away outside, body blackening, puking blood, stutering
she doesnt know where shes going, asking herself many questions, everything blurry
lyren’s transformation is complete, her arms are all black and claws are growing
her body is super weak and she is collapsing, puking blood and everything
faeris (not opale) comes in and kills lyren as her body is blackening
“im sorry you didnt use your time wisely” lumia comes in
“im sorry you knew about this, sweatheart”
faeris, and opale’s shadow around the corpse of lyren
boi sees them by the window, they see him too. lumia is hidden in the shadows, smirking, and comes in panicked on her sister’s corpse to fool boi
FOURTH STEP
TERMINATING
“ GIVEN IN DEATH “



EMPHASIZE “SEEING” and VISUAL THINGS
because lyren sees things
eyes etc
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